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21 April 2012 @ 09:08 pm
Fic: In a Name [SG-1]  
Title: In a Name
Word Count: 224
Rating: Teen and Up
Original/Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Sam
Warnings: none
Summary: their history told through Jack's words and voice
Notes: written for writerverse Weekly Quick Fic Challenge. Prompt: say my name


In a Name

He whispers, “Sam,” just before their lips meet and a cavalcade of images fly through her mind:
their history told through Jack’s words and voice.

His acerbic tone at their first meeting quickly morphing into respect.
Captain

Authority, fondness, expectation, even exasperation
as they faced more and more impossible tasks together.
Carter!

The pride and satisfaction in his voice as he twice pinned new rank insignia on her shoulders.
Major
Lieutenant Colonel Samantha Carter

And then he transferred out of the SGC, out of her direct chain of command,
and a world of possibilities opened to them.

Her name uttered with reverential awe as first his eyes, then his hands, traced her body,
lit by the cabin firelight as they made love for the first time.
Sam

Her name, a plea groaned out as she teased him softly with lips and tongue.
God, Sam, please

Focusing on his voice over the phone, filled with fear and fury and desperation,
as she drifted in and out of consciousness.
Hang on, Sam. I’m on my way.

The complete openness and vulnerability in his eyes, his voice, his shaking hands,
as if she could say anything but yes.
Sam, will you marry me?

And now, their lips part as his cheek slides against hers.
His whisper softly moves through veil and hair.
“I love you, Sam. Forever.”





 
 
 
Ami Ven: Alwaysami_ven on April 22nd, 2012 06:10 am (UTC)
Oh, this is just completely and utterly perfect.
magickmoons: sam jack just usmagickmoons on April 22nd, 2012 03:27 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
fridayschild85fridayschild85 on April 22nd, 2012 09:02 pm (UTC)
Absolutely lovely. Thanks for sharing!
magickmoons: sam jackmagickmoons on April 22nd, 2012 10:14 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
NVGVUP: 1 is the Loneliest #nvgvup on April 22nd, 2012 11:50 pm (UTC)
This is really nice and sweet. I love the progression told through Jack's own words and the emotions you put behind them.
magickmoons: sam jack askewmagickmoons on April 23rd, 2012 05:15 pm (UTC)
Thanks, glad you liked it!
thothmes: Wedding in 200 - Private Momentthothmes on April 23rd, 2012 02:33 am (UTC)
What I love about this is that it is not as simple as their story through Jack's words and voice. It's their story told through the moments of Jack's words and voice that Sam chooses to recall. So much packed into such a small piece, box within box.
magickmoons: sam jack alwaysmagickmoons on April 23rd, 2012 05:16 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much!