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21 May 2012 @ 09:15 pm
Ficlet: A Very Good Morning  
Title: A Very Good Morning
Word Count: 159
Rating: Teen and Up
Original/Fandom: Reader's Choice (I wrote it with Stargate: SG-1 in mind, but basically anything long running with UST will work)
Characters/Pairings: Reader's Choice (I wrote it a with Stargate: SG-1 UST couple in mind, but there are no identifying names or genders, so have fun!)
Warnings:
Summary: The morning after
Notes: written for a writerverse challenge: dialogue-only



A Very Good Morning

“Good morning.”

“Good morning.”

“So...”

“Yeah.”

“So, we...”

“We really did.”

...

...

“It was... nice.”

“Nice?”

“Well, maybe more than nice.”

“How much more?”

“God, like your ego needs more stroking!”

“Well, maybe not my ego, but I can think of another part of me that wouldn’t mind some stroking.”

“You’re insatiable.”

“We’re got nearly a decade of foreplay behind us. Oh, yeah, just like that. Ohhh...It’s going to take more than a night to satisfy me.”

“That’s really good to hear. Because I have, as you noted, almost 10 years of fantasies that I can’t wait to compare to reality.”

“Mmmmm... Like what?”

“Like... do you like it when I do this?”

“Oh god! Yeeees... Don’t. Stop.”

...

“Hey, I said, ‘don’t stop.’”

“Look at me. I promise you, now that I’ve got you, I will never stop. I love you.”

“I’ve always loved you. Now to get back to what we were doing...”

“Ahhhhh... you sentimental fool.”



 
 
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shanashana0809 on May 22nd, 2012 04:43 am (UTC)
That was an adorable piece, even though I had absolutely no clue it was based in SG-1 fandom or even who was speaking. I think that it really tells something about the character interaction that they seem to spark off each other without the audience knowing who they are.

I really liked how strong their voices were, which is a funny thing to say about a piece that's all dialouge, I know, but I thought that despite being all talking, their general personalities came through very clearly, but like I said before some sort of hint as who was involved would have been amazing too!

Edited: Geez, my mind has gone walk about! I read one thing and type another!

Edited at 2012-05-22 04:44 am (UTC)
magickmoons: teal'cmagickmoons on May 22nd, 2012 06:55 pm (UTC)
Thanks. I actually went out of my way to keep it very vague in regards to character or setting. I think I was just being ornery by that point. I'd tried like three other times to write something for the dialogue-only and it just wasn't working. So I went with something totally anonymous and got it written!